The pavements grey, smile at the stranger in me,
Or perhaps they scoff.
They scoff at the helpless Nomad in me
The suppressed voices in me.
My hands, tired and coarse
Is well aware of my past.
My cold bare feet,
Aware of the paths I had followed.
Was it my heart or my hope
That binded me to where I am now,
Hopelessly Alone
Heartlessly unkind.
Where are my fears,
I asked my soul,
the retort was simple yet unconvincing
‘Why more’!
Emotionless, expressionless, I am
With a straight face, I move ahead
With little expectations, I strode ahead
With no hope, I step alone.
The cold deeds of mankind,
Isolated me from a world that was once mine
With no reasons justifiable
No answers to my questions.
I have only known ways,
Where I had travelled alone
Where I was left alone,
Where I was the one.. the only one
Emotionless, expressionless, I did
Move on, with nothing to lose but to gain
With nothing to cherish, but memories,
To move on with my journey, as the only one…
With hope!
Read. Love. Live 🖤
Beautiful 💖 and fitted the topic perfectly!
I really like this, but it’s up to our judge to announce the winner!
I do hope you win, we’ll see on Wednesday ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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That’s so uplifting!!!!
Thank you for the motivation..
I really don’t care to be the winner..
But I wanted to participate and see other people’s beautiful poems too!!!
And I wanted to test my skills too. I am more like a writer.. writing poems never crossed my mind.. but I have done that too. Bcoz of you!!
Thanks!!
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My pleasure 💖 🤗
Aathmana, you have inspired me to keep posting on Penable, because I know that i will get sweet feedback from you and you will read it. Thank you for being awesome!
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That’s so flattering!!
Thank you to you too!! For being a wonderful support for me!!
HapPy BLoGgiNg!!
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Beautiful poem 😊
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Thanks so much for the motivation!!!🤗
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you are welcome ☺
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Well written 🙂
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Thank you Ayesha (can I call you that?)
🤗
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Of course you can 😂♥️
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Okay Ayesha
Cheers to our new friendship!
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🥳🥳💕
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A beautiful response to Isolation. Every single word reverberates with the feeling. Loved this Athmana !!
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Thank you so much for your kind words.. never thought that I would be able to write something like this which could earn me humble and kind words from people like you..
Thank you for your support!
😭♥️🤗😀
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It was a pleadure to read your take on Isolation !! Much love to you 🙂 ❤
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🤗😍
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🙂 🙂
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Loneliness is indeed, a horrendous thing to experience. You’ve summed it up in this cool poem. Looking forward to see more poems 😁
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This comment of yours means a lot to me, a person who don’t do much poetry. This is definitely encouraging!!🤗😋🤩
Thanks for the support and your statement is indeed true..😀
Loneliness is so intolerable..!!😥
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No problem 🙂
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🤗
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Loved your poem ..:)
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Thank you so much!!❤️❤️😊
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Word drive with good feelings too..
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Thank you so much! I am very poor at poetry! This are my first ones!
Your words means a lot to me!😍
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Isolated me from a world that was once mine
With no reasons justifiable
No answers to my questions.
This is like isolated me ..
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Really ..amazing..very beautifully written i must say..
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